I had a lot of writing class on fall semester. I was pressure to type in English fast. I couldn't type a lot of words in English. We should practice typing trial at own home and so on. Because I need to a lot of time to progress in writing skills.
I hadn't a lot of English words....so I couldn't write long sentence on essays or book review. It needs a lot of English words to educate writing skills.
I regretted that I didn't do my homework of my writing class by the deadline. If you would like to get earn credit, you should do homework or typing trial actively. I often couldn't write 100 words in English on speed trial. You should attend all class.
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2008年1月29日
Cheesecake
Yesterday I made a rare cheesecake.
It was so delicious for me. Today, Saki came to my house. She said to me"Its good taste!!".
I try to make it again!!
Please eat it!!
It was so delicious for me. Today, Saki came to my house. She said to me"Its good taste!!".
I try to make it again!!
Please eat it!!
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Typing
Typing is difficult for me. I don’t like typing trial. At writing class I do typing trial. I couldn’t 100 words at typing trial. But I practiced typing fast in English. So I could type more than 100 words in English. So I was happy. I think it is important that we practice to type in English. I would like to type very fast. So I have to practice to type more. I couldn’t type in English without this writing class. So I appreciated. In the future, I would like to use computer easily. I like to make my blog. (100 words)
2008年1月15日
Coming of Age Day♪
↑She is my best friend, she was same high school.
January,14
I live Kumamoto City.
Today Coming Of Age Day was held at Kumamoto City.
I put on long-sleeved kimono of black color.
I took a lot of pictures!!
After that, I took part in alumni meeting!!
I haven't see my friends of my Jr. High school. So I am so happy.
Thank you organizer. I could meet my class teacher of my Jr. High School days.
And I went to Kumamoto downtown to see friends of my high school days.
I had a nice day♪
I became adult!!! My mother and father and all people I could see,Thank you for bringing up me!!! I can't thank you enough......
I live Kumamoto City.
Today Coming Of Age Day was held at Kumamoto City.
I put on long-sleeved kimono of black color.
I took a lot of pictures!!
After that, I took part in alumni meeting!!
I haven't see my friends of my Jr. High school. So I am so happy.
Thank you organizer. I could meet my class teacher of my Jr. High School days.
And I went to Kumamoto downtown to see friends of my high school days.
I had a nice day♪
I became adult!!! My mother and father and all people I could see,Thank you for bringing up me!!! I can't thank you enough......
2008年1月13日
Book review2-18: SARRY'S PHONE
I read "SALLY'S PHONE".
Sally is always running. She has her phone for all time...
But suddenly she has a different phone and it changes her life.
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Book review2-17: KING ARTHUR
It is the year 650 in England.
There is war everywhere because the old king is dead and he has no son....
This book is scary for me...I thought war was bad things.
Book review2-16: Sara Says No!!
Here is Middletown!!
Everybody is at the market. Today there is a new man at the market. His name is Mister Fruit. His daughter is helping him.Her name is Sara.Everybody likes Fruit.
But Sara don't want to work at the market....
Sara couldn't understand his father....
I thought Sara is not cheat and miracle girls.
Book review 2-15: The Magic Barber
I read "Magic Barber".
Where is this?? I t is afternoon in Crossways. Crossways is a sleepy.
Everybody in Crossways wear a large hat.
But one day.....a small boy is walking along the street. He is beating drum. The small boy is walking in front of a donkey.
One man sitting on the cart.
He cut people of cross way. The magic Barber pulls away the towel.
People's hair color became green, yellow,red and so on.
But next day, they wake up in the morning. A young man looks in the mirror.....Where is hair!! He has no hair, so the people of Crossway are angry. They want their hats back......
I like this book. I want to read continuance of this book.
Where is this?? I t is afternoon in Crossways. Crossways is a sleepy.
Everybody in Crossways wear a large hat.
But one day.....a small boy is walking along the street. He is beating drum. The small boy is walking in front of a donkey.
One man sitting on the cart.
He cut people of cross way. The magic Barber pulls away the towel.
People's hair color became green, yellow,red and so on.
But next day, they wake up in the morning. A young man looks in the mirror.....Where is hair!! He has no hair, so the people of Crossway are angry. They want their hats back......
I like this book. I want to read continuance of this book.
2008年1月10日
Book review2-14: Streets of LONDON
Tina lives on the streets of London.
She has a friend.
But he goes away suddenly....
Tina likes to draw pictures. But her parents said"You can't live on pictures,Tina". I thought Tina was shocked and sad...
2008年1月9日
Book review2-12: THE MISSING COINS
bath is very old city in England.
Pete and Carla are students in Bath. They like the city. I has a beautiful Abbey. They began to find quiet place. They find a little shop there. Old man is there, he is the shopkeeper. The shop is stamp collect shop.
Where is coin?
I think that this story is so simple, so almost people can read easily.
Bookreview2-13: HoLLY WOOD
This book is put cute pictures.
Marcel and his friend are on holidays in Los Angeles.
Marcel is so clever. So I like him!!
This book is like comic!!
Marcel and his friend are on holidays in Los Angeles.
Marcel is so clever. So I like him!!
This book is like comic!!
Writing Ⅳｃ：Portfolio
Reviews, Posts, and Words
(See: Note 2, below.)| Months | 08 | 09 | 10 | 11 | 12 | 01 | Totals | fn | Indices |
| Book reviews | 0 | 0 | 5 | 3 | 3 | 7 | 18 | ||
| Blog posts | 0 | 2 | 15 | 14 | 9 | 9 | 49 | ||
| Words | 0 | 82 | 1110 | 2713 | 1535 | 910 | 6350 | ||
| TOTAL | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- |
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below)| 1.1. Showcase | Short titles [+ links] | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M | Notes |
| Mega- essay 07.10.12 | 2007.10.09 | 5 | 331words | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | ||
| Favorite place(-s) 07.10.26 | 2oo7.11.14 | 5 | 347words | 0 | 1 | 1 | 0 | ||
| Movie review 07.11.11 | 2007.11.10 | 4 | 342words | 0 | 0 | 1 | 0 | ||
| Community life 07.11.25 | 2007.11.25 | 4 | 329words | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | ||
| TV in Japan 07.12.09 |
| 4 | 313words | 0 | 1 | 2 | 0 | ||
| Learning w/ computers 07.12.21 | Learning with computers | 2008.12.21 | 5 | 772words | 0 | 2 | 1 | 0 | |
| Totals | --- | --- | 2534words | --- |
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included
M: number of other media included
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- [I think that my best essay is about Learning with computer. Because I could write the longest sentence. And I could look back to writing class. But I wanted to put a lot of Links or photo.]
2.0. Comment
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd) | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | "Wow! Get a Load of These Demographics." | 07.12.12 | 22words | Good |
| 2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | eripopon♪: 4th Essay: Kumamoto | 07.09.26 | 36words | good |
| 2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | ||||
| 2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd) | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments* |
| 2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | ５th essay: TV | 07.12.09 | ||
| 2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | --- | |
| 2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | ||
| 2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | ||||
| 2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | --- | |
| 2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | ||
* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?- ... No, it doesn't. I didn't know how to display comments...
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
- [I like to get comments from classmates. I could notice my mistake by comments. But I often forgot where my comment is on classmate's blog posts. So finding my comments on other blog is hard. ]
3.0. Typing Speed Trials
| Showcase | Numbers of words | Dates (yy.mm.dd) |
| 3.1. Worst typing speed trial* | 34 | 07.10.03 |
| 3.2. Best typing speed trial* | 116 | 07.10.24 |
| 3.3. Improvement (best minus worst) |
| --- |
| 3.4. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials** | 58 | 08.12.05/o8.12.19/08.01 |
* Current semester typing speed trials (five minutes)
** Please list all three dates.
4.0. Book Reviews
| 4.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | Words | Comments |
| Example: | Vampire Killer | 07.05.16 | 39 | 1 |
| 2-01 | Daiana Life of a princess | 07.10.02 | 51 | 0 |
| 2-02 | 07.10.04 | 22 | 0 | |
| 2-03 | Between Two Worlds | 07.10.06 | 39 | 0 |
| 2-04 | THE LONG ROAD | 07.10.07 | 57 | 0 |
| 2-05 | Ari and his CAMERA | 07.10.09 | 28 | 0 |
| 2-06 | Two Boy friends | 07.11.01 | 15 | 0 |
| 2-07 | THE LEOPARD AND THE LIGHTHOUSE | 07.11.12 | 23 | 0 |
| 2-08 | Huckle berry Finn | 07.11.30 | 76 | 0 |
| 2-09 | Soccer | 07.12.01 | 41 | 0 |
| 2-10 | The Gift of the Magi and other Stories | 07.12.02 | 61 | 0 |
| 2-11 | BROWN EYES | 07.12.19 | 35 | 0 |
| 2-12 | THE MISSING COINS | 08.01.09 | 63 | 0 |
| 2-13 | HoLLY WOOD | 08.01.09 | 30 | 0 |
| 2-14 | Streets of LONDON | 08.01.10 | 36 | 0 |
| 2-15 | The Magic Barber | |||
| 2-16 | Sara Says No!! | |||
| 2-17 | KING ARTHUR | |||
| 2-18 | SARRY'S PHONE | 24 | ||
| --- | --- | TOTALS: |
4.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]
5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
| Showcase | Yes | No |
| 5.1. Does your blog have an archive? | ○ | |
| 5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | ○ | |
| 5.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | ○ | |
| 5.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | ○ | |
| 5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | ○ | |
| 5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
| ○ | |
| ○ | |
| ○ | |
| ○ | |
| ○ | |
| 5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | ○ | |
| --- | --- |
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| 5.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
| 5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics? | ○ | |
| ○ | |
| --- | --- |
| 5.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | ○ | |
| --- | --- |
| 5.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | ||
| --- | --- |
| --- | --- |
5.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.- ...
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- ...
6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing
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7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors
- ...I like blog that many pictures and media, links and photos put in . So you had better use a lot of photos and media and so on.
2008年1月5日
Switch
Today I met best friends who were same high school.
First, I saw Asuka and Megu. Megu lives in Osaka. So I saw my them after a long separation.
I went to cafe shop to eat light meal. And we went shopping!!
After that I met another friends. They were also same high school students. Kana and Izumi and Erica....we went to bar to eat and drink. The bar is named "Ai". I ate a lot of delicious dishes! And we went to coffee bar! This picture is coffee Mocha.
I had a nice day♪
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